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Short Story: Resistance by ~deamonicangel:icondeamonicangel:



It was an ordinary night and I was walking with two girls. We had known each other for as long as we all could remember and there was a definite closeness between all of us.
We were chatting as usual about nothing particular as I looked to where we were going. I noticed a park up ahead and focused on it, the sounds of my friends laughing and chatting becoming blurred.
“Hey” the girl in the middle said to me.
I snapped back to “reality” and turned round to her.
“Wasn’t that great?” she asked smiling... but it wasn’t her.
“No” I cried, and stepped back.
The girl, maybe still mentally there was no longer there physically. She had been replaced with a physical projection of a girl, who in my mind, would never get a chance to talk to me, somebody who I hated.
“What’s wrong?” she asked, oblivious to what I was seeing.
“No, no, get away from me” I cried, clutching the sides of my head.
“You’re not her, go away!!” The world went fuzzy “Get out of my mind!!”
©2009-2010 ~deamonicangel
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Author's Comments

I didn't know if I should share this one. The dream happened about a week ago and it depicts me fighting back against my dream. To be honest it's the first time I've had power to fight it.

I would like to point out that the dream the night after this was the one with the chaos spirit on the train attacking the girl. Maybe my mind was angry I fought back and has sent something to get me? I'm not sure. Maybe I'm just paranoid now...

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:iconimtoocuteforthis:
lol different, but pretty cool :P and creepy (:lmao: ) its stated perfectly yur obsessed with lousie. if that's alright for me to say.

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:sadangel:
...:unimpressed: wow.
:icondeamonicangel:
Well it was, I didn't know I could fight back against my mind when I was asleep!

And no it wasn't her it was my friend who I've known all my life and her cousin. We see each other more as family than anything else.

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Thought for the day: Walk softly, and carry a big gun.
:iconcrystalkaba:
this does read like a dream. if you want to read it more like a story i'd do a bit less explaining and a bit more describing... if that makes any sense at all ><.

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:iconimtoocuteforthis:
i dont think anybody can. its sort of impossible...

oh? it wasn't lousie? then why do you hate that girl if you "see each other more as family than anything else" SERIOUSLY.

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:ohnoes::popcorn::hungry::juggle:
:shh:
:blahblah:
:whisper::constipated:
:explosion:
:floating:
:lonely:
:sadangel:
...:unimpressed: wow.
:icondeamonicangel:
Louise has nothing to do with this dream.

The two girls I was with I didn't hate but one of the girls transformed into someone I hate. Do you get it now?

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Thought for the day: Walk softly, and carry a big gun.
:icondeamonicangel:
Yeah it does, thanks.

I prefer to leave this one as more dream-like. I think it helps to put into context why I'm having worse dreams lately...

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Thought for the day: Walk softly, and carry a big gun.
:iconimtoocuteforthis:
yeah pretty much.

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:ohnoes::popcorn::hungry::juggle:
:shh:
:blahblah:
:whisper::constipated:
:explosion:
:floating:
:lonely:
:sadangel:
...:unimpressed: wow.

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